Dan, loved the details in the room, and the perspective to the side of the desk, looking at the floor and the cabinet. And although I don;t like pinky fries (must be a Chicago thing) I really liked the dialogue too. Drawn out and deliberate. Keep up the great work!
Pinky fries indeed. They were inspired by a time when I worked in a returaunt as a waiter and the cook almost spilled hot oil from the frialator on my hand.
I am torn, I’m not sure if I like the sharper blue lines or the softer ones in the dream sequence. Both have their charms. Overall I lean slightly more to the sharper blues you returned too. ::claps hands in appreciation::
Dan, loved the details in the room, and the perspective to the side of the desk, looking at the floor and the cabinet. And although I don;t like pinky fries (must be a Chicago thing) I really liked the dialogue too. Drawn out and deliberate. Keep up the great work!
Thank you!
oh man this is getting gross, but compellingly so. must keep reading…
Haha, I was shooting for gross, so I’m glad!
Dwj
mmm. Pinky fries.
Pinky fries indeed. They were inspired by a time when I worked in a returaunt as a waiter and the cook almost spilled hot oil from the frialator on my hand.
Dwj
I am torn, I’m not sure if I like the sharper blue lines or the softer ones in the dream sequence. Both have their charms. Overall I lean slightly more to the sharper blues you returned too. ::claps hands in appreciation::
Thanks, Ilbum! I liked the dream sequence style too. I will definitely return to it if we have any more flashbacks.
Dwj