Your “camera work” is astonishing. It makes the “talky” page very dynamic, establishes mood and conveys rhythm. Reading it is like watching one of my favorite TV show scenes. (And technically, you even conform to the 180 degree rule.)
It’s beautiful how the panels 5 and 6 each focus on the listener instead of the talker, making them feel far more contemplative rather than declarative.
And how panel 3 and 6 close up on either character, and contrast each other nicely, Peggy very introspective, Al more attentive.
Now tell me you were “just trying to fit everything in” …
Hahaha Thanks for that wonderful examination! I will say that I knew that even though it was going to be tough, I had to do an “overhead” shot of them talking, simply because it helped make for a more dynamic page. Thank you so much for noticing my hard work!!!
Discussion (17) ¬
sounds like she doesn’t want him to have the regrets she has.
An interesting (and possibly quite accurate) thought! Thanks for reading!
oh… this chapter is going to be good… i know that patience is a virtue… but damn! i am a virtueless man!!! arghghgh!!
I knowww it takes so long to draw tooooo aghhhhhh
Love that they love coffee!
Of course! For those long nights in space!
Yes…flying a jet freighter…that’s where your feet go during the long nights…should be the same on a space freighter…
You said it!
I like her approach. Reluctant, but still there.
Yup. Thats a really good way to describe Peggy, actually!
Great page.
Your “camera work” is astonishing. It makes the “talky” page very dynamic, establishes mood and conveys rhythm. Reading it is like watching one of my favorite TV show scenes. (And technically, you even conform to the 180 degree rule.)
It’s beautiful how the panels 5 and 6 each focus on the listener instead of the talker, making them feel far more contemplative rather than declarative.
And how panel 3 and 6 close up on either character, and contrast each other nicely, Peggy very introspective, Al more attentive.
Now tell me you were “just trying to fit everything in” …
Hahaha Thanks for that wonderful examination! I will say that I knew that even though it was going to be tough, I had to do an “overhead” shot of them talking, simply because it helped make for a more dynamic page. Thank you so much for noticing my hard work!!!
You’re welcome.
Thank you for doing the hard work.
The “overhead shot” is totally worth it.
Ohhh suspenseful reveal…
yupppp