Man, Daniel. That’s heavy. I’m glad you aren’t afraid to go these places, but you must be invested in the characters you create. Is it rough ending chapters like this?
It was hard to write, I didn’t want to do it, but the story called for it. My hurts are soothed in that I know I’m going with my gut. Thanks for sticking with it!
agreed… the way emotions are illustrated in this work is simply amazing… the rawness and the tenderness comes across like very few other pieces of work that i’ve seen
I don’t think Howard is the kind of person to give false hope and the act of trying to stop the bleeding indicates that he thinks there might be a chance of survival. That’s my hope and I’m sticking to it.
bobbis death was sad. when i am writing this i am only up to page 52 chapter 4. i really want them to all live on jays spaceship and drive of into the sunset and all live happily ever after.
Man, Daniel. That’s heavy. I’m glad you aren’t afraid to go these places, but you must be invested in the characters you create. Is it rough ending chapters like this?
It was hard to write, I didn’t want to do it, but the story called for it. My hurts are soothed in that I know I’m going with my gut. Thanks for sticking with it!
This is a trip for sure… Sad to see Bobbi die, but thumbs up for the powerful scene.
I- really don’t think she is dead, she only just arrived and her death would kinda make her place in the character bios kinda… empty…
What we can surmise from this, I think, is that we get one hurt comrade back on his feet (Al) only to have someone else get hurt.
well… her bios is rather empty… no name… no race… it is setting her up (were she in color) to be decked out in a red shirt… 8(
True, she may live. It’s more I felt that she died and I felt the weight of the scene.
agreed… the way emotions are illustrated in this work is simply amazing… the rawness and the tenderness comes across like very few other pieces of work that i’ve seen
I wish I could comment! It could go both ways.
And Tony, thanks so much for your words. It means a lot that people think my story means something.
duude.
maan.
What’s next? Bloody wedding?
Oh man, oh man.
.. oh man, almost watering my eyes…
Sorry Max!
Bobbi’s not dead yet!!! Damn it! it is just the shock setting in… she’s lost blood… i’ll give you that… but she can be fixed… right?? right???
man… heavy heavy heavy… but so well done…
Heavy indeed. Thanks for sticking with me!
Howard is such a sweetheart! I love this guy!
Yeah he’s awesome!
I don’t think Howard is the kind of person to give false hope and the act of trying to stop the bleeding indicates that he thinks there might be a chance of survival. That’s my hope and I’m sticking to it.
bobbis death was sad. when i am writing this i am only up to page 52 chapter 4. i really want them to all live on jays spaceship and drive of into the sunset and all live happily ever after.