Well… I guess Jonah doesn’t have to worry about UE anymore. At least, not until they find out that Forthe didn’t snuff him before getting his face ripped off.
Hmm. Somehow “POP!” just falls short. Even “Pop-squirt!” doesn’t quite make it. OK. Remember you guys, somebody’s gonna havta cleanup when this is over!
The art work of the actions and expressions was done to keep my eyes following the actions that I didn’t notice the “pop” until I read about it in the comments.
Yeah, that’s the thing about making your own comics. With an editor, you have to work with them and they keep you kind of grounded, in a sense. but when you’re on your own, you can do ANYTHING. Most of the time that’s a good thing, but it can get overwhelming with all the options, haha.
wow wo — pilot pump that anti armor gun you have <—- so why the climax , just have the guy with the mech pump some gun into that torso aim at weak point
Well… I guess Jonah doesn’t have to worry about UE anymore. At least, not until they find out that Forthe didn’t snuff him before getting his face ripped off.
You said it, Asimov! Thanks for reading!
Hmm. Somehow “POP!” just falls short. Even “Pop-squirt!” doesn’t quite make it. OK. Remember you guys, somebody’s gonna havta cleanup when this is over!
Glennster, I totally agree with you. I just ran out of time to think about it. Any other suggestions?
You know, What “pop” does makes the action much more violent. He ripped it off with such force that it just “popped off. Great page Dan.
Thanks, my man!
wow… talk about a “heads up”… up and up and up and pop… its gone 8)
POP! SPLORT!
Vonbek, I was scrolling down to make a comment on heads up/ heads off but I read yours and I have to say, ” You said it better than I would have.”
Thanks Ol’ Gui 8)
The art work of the actions and expressions was done to keep my eyes following the actions that I didn’t notice the “pop” until I read about it in the comments.
Yeah, that’s the thing about making your own comics. With an editor, you have to work with them and they keep you kind of grounded, in a sense. but when you’re on your own, you can do ANYTHING. Most of the time that’s a good thing, but it can get overwhelming with all the options, haha.
Great page! Eff Forthe, lol. Space goblin is cool! Can’t wait for the spread.
Thanks man! Can’t wait to show you!
Excellent
Thanks, Ralph!
wow wo — pilot pump that anti armor gun you have <—- so why the climax , just have the guy with the mech pump some gun into that torso aim at weak point